Buzz Buzz

cnc plz :) ty

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z...7/BuzzBuzz.png

The render sticks out to much.

Not liking the render nor the text and the border is also bad.
Very messy and no flow either
The blue c4ds are bad too, throws off the color flow.

Background looks really good, but as the others have pointed out I think the render just sticks out a little too much and for me looks a little too sharp. Work on the blending and just change the border colour to black and you'll be good :)

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Blink737

Not liking the render nor the text and the border is also bad.
Very messy and no flow either
The blue c4ds are bad too, throws off the color flow.

---

The effects are really neat and the text is a pass for me but Blink said it all. Work on proper flow before you think of adding anything fancy.