GI Joe

http://www.thegridironpalace.com/for...1252010733.png

couldnt get what i was going for.

i like it dude, but try to bring you focal a bit more

It's a little dark and difficult to view. This is because your background is the same shade of black as the character.
Some more colours or a dark grey may help out as a base colour.
Overall, it does look good and it's a nice tag.

I like what you were going for. Sig has a nice feel to it. Just needs better lighting and more of a focal.

its good, just few things really...
only thing that really stands out at a glance to me was the bg, just seems there, text could use some work, and id say maybe tone down the use of tech (i.e. the left side seems to be a bit cluttered)
Nonetheless it is a good tag as stated
gj :)

thanx guys

sig is way too dark imo. it needs some lighting and it'll be fine.