ProtoSmudge.

Again tried something, new.

Fail?

http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...rototype-1.png

BW:
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...rototypebw.png

oh, the text is unreadable :(

Yeah, I have no idea what the text says. The smudging is nice, but the top-left looks out of place. The placement of the light source is just disrupting the flow for me since the smudging goes NW and the light source goes SW.

I like it but too clean for me.
Font could be 10 times better.
But good job, I tried using the render but I failed horribly.

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Originally Posted by Shadow379

I like it but too clean for me.

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agreed. lets detail that smudge!

=D and text is ok if unreadable ill assume it as an effect filler lol tho it shouldnt be.

good colors as well.