StreetFighter

http://i28.tinypic.com/fee7pt.jpg


CnC Please :)

points :)

1. dont make a sig a square like shape lol
2. it looks like u erased around that render instead of actually takeing the time and rendering it your self
3. NO LIGHTING bleh bleh
3. NO DEPTH bleh bleh
4. c4d on the left doesnt seems to be going to the left in stead up like the flow of your other c4ds
4. Text isnt so great my friend
5. you need to try to blend your c4ds with your focal better

looks like u know how to use c4d place ment just work on those factors and ull be pro in no time

So much potential in you!

The actual placement of the C4Ds is alright, but the blending and depth just aren't there. Lets parts slip behind the render [Which looks poorly rendered or perhaps you poorly erased the C4D going over the top of it] and let parts come over the top. Not sure if the render was like this originally, but what's up with the top left on the fist? Looks to be random smudging against the flow covering up parts of it.