Warhammer

I used some parts of different tutorials. CNC please. Thanks
http://i946.photobucket.com/albums/a...mmercopy20.jpg

wow thats really different ( i mean that with as much endearment as i can)

too much sharpening, the colours are starting to fall apart. makes it look too sloppy
i love the little lines of light from the top right, and the blur looks pretty good. i like how its hard to really tell where the background starts and the foreground ends, but i do think the character focus is sloppy. i dont know what it is, and where the main point of focus is supposed to be (does it have eyes? a face? a point of motion?). from wat i see, i think you went a little overboard with fx, try making a sig without the help of tuts next time, and dont follow everything word for word, use your imagination, and let your eyes tell you what looks good.

haha ok. that one was just trying the background. the character i just put on cause it was kinda boring. but i'll fix it. thanks. =)

Can you take the render out and show us what the background looks like without it? Cos by the look of it, it may look better in kinda a photomanip form.