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Way to empty on the left side. smudging needs some work.. unfinished project
This needs a lot more work. Simple is actually the hardest to achieve, believe it or not. You have a slight problem with the lighting. See how the light falls on the right of his face, but the light in your bg is coming form the left?... you should fix that because it doesn't make sense. When you have so much space, try not to squash the text so close to the render, it makes the negative space look unintentional. Hope this helps =)
its too plain, it needs other effects to it, the smudging should go, and dont blur his hand...it makes it look unrealistic. keep workin with this 1
