Venom

I think its a fail.. hehe :)
http://i1011.photobucket.com/albums/...venom-sig1.png

I like it but it still needs cleaning up , the text could be a lil closer, and sharp things on lower left side could be blurred some, lighting is right on, like that, and depth is there could be more but it looks nice, colors work well. good job man.

Its way too dark and monotone for my liking, and it looks like u've got 1 too many Gradient maps on it, set the opcity down on the Puple/Orange gradient to about 20% ish. Again as with the last i don't like the C4D across the left and right arms and also the C4D across the bottom left looks slightly out of place. U need to blend the render more across the left side rib cage and the 2 rocks off to the side, if thats what they are (I havent seen the origional Render even though its been used here a few times ^^) Once again it's too big and the text needs scrapping. Look at Papa's Text tut for some guidence the rest is just creativity.