Metroid

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rate this please

SaTe, I think you need to try a different style or start reading some tutorials. Most of your tags are the same/similar and it's just too chaotic. I would suggest something like my Carnage one or one of the smudging tutorials. I'm saying this because I don't want you to get set back in to spam C4D backgrounds and want you to get better.

Ok i'll read some tutorial.. I know this one bad.

Dude we've said it many times your style is too messy. You can pull it off if you didnt OD on it. Like I learned in my AP Calc class and all other math classes before it Keep-It-Simple-Stupid lol. This doesn't always work in GFX but is a great rule to follow. You could pick up sprites if you wanted to because your style could work on centralizing a sprite.