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I'm not a big fan of Labron,
but after seing this I'ma big fan of your Work,
that's Awsome!
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thanks for the compliment man
No problem.. iCall it as I see it..Lol,
:D
:cool:
Wow, this is amazing.
The C4Ds are blended in perfectly.
Nice but try to get rid of is legs it kills it for some reason imo.
Nice job;)
I agree with the legs, i should remove the v4d/other thing between it anyway;)
Excellent work, great use of C4D's
Ok, It's a really cool concept and the execution is good too. the left is a bit too empty IMO. Empty space can be good but never leave to much. Also, The explosion of the c4d's are going in completely diferent directions, killing any flow. The c4d's blending is good in some areas, no so good in others. For instance, the c4d cuts straight across his mid section and covers his hands messily. His legs are a problem here as well, The c4d's cover it and the black background doesn't help it either. I would say erase the part of the c4d exploding out at the bottom and go over his legs lightly with a dodge tool. One last thing... next to the nike basketball logo at the bottom left there is a stray part of c4d thats pretty irritating.All this needs is some minor adjustments to make it great, the light sources have been placed and executed well and so has the placement of the c4d's and in most areas the blending of them. Well done dude.
