HOT

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/r...uriken/hot.png

I agree with the Title ^^

Its beeter than ur current, the colours are good, Text is ok, Flow is cool.

Overall quite good ^^

love the colours, the light source is a little confusing to me, it should be coming from in front of her and at a low angle, but the background suggests that the light is behind her and to the right. kinda hate the text, its a little too random, and it pulls away from the main focus. i love the background colours tho, they perfectly match the intensity of the render, and the c4d thingy adds the perfect balance of interest to the background. good job :D

i only used 1 c4d, the rest is fractal brushes, and the bg is smudged, ... never was a text pro XD