First Vertical Sig..

This is the first vertical sig that I have done.. CnC, please?

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z...eppehacols.png

I think I messed up the lower left... :/

ithink it's tooo big for Vertical sig..

you can use 400x150

there is no light source..
need depth on it..
but good job..
i like it..

there's no lighting, no depth, the flow needs a little bit work, text needs work(I'm not good with text either), and the render is like falling to the right comparing to the background.. gj tho.. :) (this is all my opinion, I'm not an expert :p)

Hmmm it looks a bit grainy, read up on some tuts mate, you'll get better.

There is a LS but its really not clear. It's part of the stock and its on the wrong side. Light hits the render on the right side and the moon from the stock is on the top left. C4Ds are a bit messy, and that Vivid Red is really distracting me from the otherwise washed out colours. Is that a style atm by the way lol, 3 washed out Verts in 1 week

Frankly, I don't think the render meshes well with the stock used.

You were probably better off using a more realistic render, or something that meshed well with the city-like background.

I guess, the stock doesn't fit with the render, didn't really try hard enough to find a matching stock.

Thanks for the comments,
I'll keep what you all said in mind when making my next tag.