sotw tag

i love the style .blueflare is doing and i tried my own of that style lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...inationtag.png

i like this tag from you oath. looks smooth

Overall composition really needs some work here.

The smokey effect just isn't working. Makes the whole thing look LQ and "gimp"ish. Could use some depth.
Quite random. I don't understand the concept at all. D: