Vector-ish!

Hi Guys! I came back with a new style! Here

http://i38.tinypic.com/343g3nc.png

Please CnC! I know I keep bumping thread, I know I am wrong, sorry everybody!

But please, i need all of your help to improve!

nice colors, definately improving from your other sigs, the text with the stroke line around it kinda kills this one tho, try smaller text and placed on other side of your render, and up a lil bit with no stroke line around it, i wouldn't really call this style vector, i don't know what style to call this tho, anime/tech, idk lol

The flow kinda is off, your splatter brushing is goin up it looks like. try making your effects etc. flow from bottom left to upper right in this one good work so far man kiu.

Thanks! I thought the text kill it too. But i nidda do my hw so... improving? really? thx! Dun think c4d work here tho. I did clipping mask, but not very visible eh?

Anymore CnC pls?