.Disarmed

the focus is way too hard to find with the light spots, and the light spots arent natural. i guess maybe they arent supposed to be light reflections, but the way they act against the background makes me think that they are. i think if you pulled the foremost chain in front of the light, along with the object focus and faded the ground out of the light spots it would look a little better, although i'm completely unsure. the text looks a little too professional for my liking, but i'm just weird like that (i think...)

i love the way the object focus has an offset balance, and how it isnt the foremost object. the chain looks great because its pulled back into the picture with the other smaller chain in the background, so it doesnt look random at all (which is something you run risk to when you add something in front of the mainground) i like it quite a bit :) good job ^.^