Dream...

Hi everybody, returning with some sigs here, my new style!

Version1:
http://i37.tinypic.com/s4s2rl.jpg

Version2:
http://i38.tinypic.com/okzxhz.jpg

Cnc is greatly, greatly appreciated!:D

Prefer V2 but cant see the little text on either... I would say lose it

You mean the small text? Its a sub text, it is meant to be small. Anymore CnC on how can I improve? Am I going forward or backwards?

V2 is better, but if you need to work on your text techniques.

I prefer version 2 because the colours stick out more and gives it more depth. I like the C4D placement, almost looks like you followd Ratchetnclanks singature tutorial. None-the-less, good signature and colours. Keep it up. :)

Nahh dont lose the mini text xD it somehow creates balance on both of em but V2 forsure :] Good Job!

Hey thanks guys! And nope, I did not follow a single tutorial for this signature. I mess around with settings and it comes out not bad so I decided to post it here for all of you to comment!

Anymore responses people? CnC? Any way to improve?

Just a suggestion: your tags may work better if you place your focal point according to the Rule of Thirds - it usually works for me.