think first sig

http://i36.tinypic.com/sfcfbr.jpg

my new sig,rate please:)

its terible..sorry

well thats a great job telling him whats wrong lol

there is no flow to it man, you gotta work on bringing the sig to life if you know what i mean, it needs a lighting source, a bit better colouring, me personally i hate c4d signatures, too overdone back when i was doing this, and it needs better effects.

ROFL its far from terrible

It's pretty nice, but try sharpening the focal point a bit more, and don't set the C4D layers to Screen or anything, just leave them as they are.

Also, change the text to something simpler and make sure it suits the look of the signature.