Abandoned...

Back again with some new c4ds on hand:

http://i36.tinypic.com/2afby38.png

CnC, i know the text problem.

Improvements?

hmm... maybe don't smudge her, make the c4ds go over her and idk the c4d collors don't really fit there in my opinion, maybe some gradiants or something

Yea i know, gradients would make her a little mono. Maybe turn up the opacity would help... Try later, and thx in advance for giving me the renders.

If you want to smudge your render, duplicate it and play with the blending modes, it looks better if your focal point isn't thrown across the tag.

I think you could make this look better with a Purple -> Orange Gradient Map set on Hue/Saturation with a mid-low opacity.

Thanks for the tip! Anymore CnC for me to improve?

Just one more thing: your C4Ds don't blend well with your background. You should find some way to make them work, perhaps a Hue/Saturation Adjustment Layer over your C4Ds?

That would make a little mono will it? Will try though. Anymore CnC pls?

Well, don't rape it with saturation, and you'll be fine.

k, thx, anymore suggestion ?

i got same thing, u gotta blend those c4d. design is all about making it realistic and c4d look just like they are thrown there keep it up its gonna be fine