Killed...

Hi, followed some of ur tips and follow some of my style, but not very happy though:

http://i36.tinypic.com/24qokr6.jpg

CnC pls.

i think its not bad at all

Not bad? Then may u tell me is there any mistakes or flaw in this sig? I need to improve! ;P

Its a good sig but maye you should have skipped smudging her back/shoulder or done it more lightly, looks abit wierd imo (and i would add a border to the top and bottom but thats just my personal preference :P)

It's pretty nice, but I think adding a light source, sharpening the focal point, and changing the color of the font would make it even better.

Thanks! Anymore comments pls ?

nice one. but i'd crop the right side (the dark part) off. that destroys the flow!! text needs to be blended in. it is just slapped on wich distracts the focal and looks ugly.
or just leave it out..

im not so expirienced to give u a proper advice im even bigger newbie but the text definetly needs to be blended nicely, either lower opacity or some clipping mask trick ;D

Thanks! Clipping mask eh ? No problem but i thought it would be difficult to see.

CnC ?