new style

Yay! I tried a style new to me...
and this is the result
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/725/bboy.png
CnC Please

contrast is too heavy. quality is low. work on keeping the image quality up when adding effects. as soo as you start getting any blurring or pixelating that means you're losing quality.

colour focus disagrees with the object focus. text take your eye even further away from the object focus. your eye is naturally drawn to light, and when theres specific points of light, you're more likely to focus on those rather than the darkest points. i love the shade/tone of blue you've got and i love the motion fx they look great, just pull the object focus a little further foreward and you'll be set
:D

The main thing that irks me is the text. You should look through some text tutorials on this forum.

first i did not see the focal at all... text is just slapped on and should be blended in more, and also right on top of the focal is not a good placement imo. rest is said above, but still i like the atm off this sig... a lot!!