Hopeless .. photomanipulation

My first design here ^_^

Sometimes we should just surrender



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i have to say, the girl's face is way too upbeat for the image you're trying to portray. she's got this "ok i'm leaving you now, see you tomorrow" kind of look, meanwhile you're portraying hopelessness... doesnt seem right to me. i think there needs to be more black, to give an endless feeling, especially at the bottom of the hole. the teardrop also looks really photoshopped, partially cause of her expression, partly cause it looks like a random drop on her cheek (it doesnt extend to her eye) and partially cause it doesnt match the contours of her face.

overall, i love this image you're trying to portray, and her outfit really helps accentuate it, with contradicting colours and all. i like the text, and how you broke up the word "hopeless" it's got a great clean feel to it, and overall its really well done. good job :D

decent, the face isnt agreeing with the whole concept of 'hopeless' and i think the text it too big.

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Originally Posted by gr4ph1kP4ND4

i have to say, the girl's face is way too upbeat for the image you're trying to portray. she's got this "ok i'm leaving you now, see you tomorrow" kind of look, meanwhile you're portraying hopelessness... doesnt seem right to me.

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I thought it should be like this
she is forced to leave
and she don't want to go
so it is hope and it is hopeless at the same time !

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Originally Posted by gr4ph1kP4ND4

i think there needs to be more black, to give an endless feeling, especially at the bottom of the hole.

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I made it darker at first it but some people couldn't recongnise at a hole !!so i modified it to be more clear


and really thanx 4 u comments ^_^