Lightning, Please CnC this.

http://i513.photobucket.com/albums/t.../Lightning.png

Worked out well i geuss
Please CnC.

http://i513.photobucket.com/albums/t.../Lightning.png

CnC. is highly appreciated

I think this is a step back from your current signature if I'm honest. No real defined flow, everything seems randomly placed and there's not much to it. I think you can do a lot better than this.

very cool idea, i like that your trying all the diff stuff out there, kiu gielke, ur improving for sure, the lighting on this one is ok, its not quite clear whats lighting the facial area on the render. the right side of this tag is a lil monotone, it kinda throws the flow and compo off a lil, still works, and is blended nicely tho so nice job.

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Originally Posted by Dom

No real defined flow, everything seems randomly placed and there's not much to it.

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