Falling to the withn...1 tag 3 version

Hi all. Sprite tag again. No more help from any people this time round :D

V1:
http://i37.tinypic.com/e6zuwo.jpg

V2:
http://i34.tinypic.com/124kojm.jpg

V3:
http://i36.tinypic.com/11ui7fl.jpg

Fav is 1 and 2 and 3:p What do u think ?

Remove the splatter. Not much better than your previous version.

Way too messy, too much is going on and text is hardly noticeable, keep practicing bro.

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Originally Posted by DR809

Way too messy, too much is going on and text is hardly noticeable, keep practicing bro.

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Yeah too many c4ds man, go easy on them.

I just used 2 abstract n it was messy? Ok... Will get tat, not too messy, and lack flow, how do i cre8 FLOW???

get rid of that stray blue C4D at the far right, change the text placement, and work more on the colors...they don't really match.

also, IMO, the sprite is kinda hard to see..

So the idea is do not put too much c4ds... k

Anymore Cnc?

i think there's a white brushed over the focal, u may minimize it so that focal will be easily seen.

Well, i did tat to blend in the focal.

Anymore CnC?