My Halloween entry

http://i35.tinypic.com/1038t9f.jpg

wish to improve here, its my entry for our current sotw. ty

very very nice man i dont like the text at all but yeah man its good

i liked this sig when i first saw it, good depth, text is decent.
the red light right in middle and behind head is a lil distracting. maybe make it darker red or take it out, idk. the veins in the face could use a lil more work to make look more real, maybe brighten with a glow. good work tho no fear, its a keeper.

thanks oath and domino for advises really appreciate ill figure out how to apply those .

need some depth around focal...

man this is messing with my brains. don't know where to look, but still i can't take my eyes off it!! Just looks a bit topazed to much.. maybe.. i don't know.. pfff

that white hole is a bit distracting IMO..

text is cool IMO .. the yellow dot is a bit distracting ..everything else seems fine IMO

Excellent work man, portrays everything nicely just that the two halves dont really match in tone.