Music Typography sig

First typography sig, won 1st at the Electronic Arts forum graphics competition but obviously with lots of room for improvement. Please cnc thanks,

http://i37.tinypic.com/2142vdz.png

try to do something more creative with more efect...this is little bit boring in my opinion

That must be one of the best typography sig I've seen. Idk what you talkin' bout bout J.O.N its typography not just another ordinary sig. I really like it and I its noticeable that you took the time and effort for this :).

pretty good imo, nice BG u created. kiu NF

I'm not too fond of how the text overlays the musical note.

Thanks for the comments guys。

Yea thats the only thing that sways me is the overlay across the Clef. Otherwise nice work ^^

As with everything I think you could have improved on the clef. The size of the clef is good however make it more noticeable would have been better. The effect on "Music" is pretty cool, shows a progressive feel with the line extending out. Not sure about the blue colour with the "ears". It does work well however you could have added something to it to make it pop just a bit more. The piano keys on the top is good, symbolizing what style of music is actually being presented as well which colours do play a part in.

Sorry for assessing it so much just trying to get the feel and understand on of this style of discussion :).

Overall interesting design. Great job :D. Keep it up.