Halo

did me a tut. thnx for the share MrK!!

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7073/halo.png

While it is hinting, the flow is sorta bad. The text is bad. I can see you were going for the 'H' to stand out more but the colours are wrong. Looks sorta blurry as well. Clipping masks were heavily abused. The colours of the piece are dull. Not liking this one dude. Don't get down though:) Keep trying.

it's cool, but IMO, the effects should stand out more.

from a distance, it looks as if there are only a few of them..

More could be added, right now it seems empty.

The effects fit in quite well, though the background doesn't.

well it was minimalistic, the tut that is. it was a tut for explaining clipping masks. but with so little done i found it quite atractive!!

I have read the tut b4 and it looks cool, but not good for the text i must say. And not liking the flow, the effects should go with it.

But anyway, good job!