Gypsy

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Text needs works. Did you blur and overlay the focal? The effects aren't bad. I think it could use some sharpening and a bit more constrast. Play around with the levels tool. Try adding a gradient map to it. Needs flow.

I like it:)

the problem was, the render was low quality, so if i sharpen it, it gets very... well... bad

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Originally Posted by Kritez

the problem was, the render was low quality, so if i sharpen it, it gets very... well... bad

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Work with high quality. I think it can be sharpened but you'll have to lower the opacity of the sharpened layer though.

well, i really liked the render, so i just went for it, and i did sharpen it, i just erased a few parts that were overly sharp

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Originally Posted by Kritez

well, i really liked the render, so i just went for it, and i did sharpen it, i just erased a few parts that were overly sharp

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I can see them. Do as I advised and lower the opacity. Focus only on the focal which would be the render. Anything else just erase. Isn't too hard to do.

i kno tak, lol

Pretty nice mate. I would move the light source a little coser to her face tho and is that a tattoo on her neck or part of the smudgeing? If its the smudgeing I would erase it. Text looks good. Needs a little more balance casue the left side is a little empty.

thx man, and yes, its a tattoo

the light source is kinda noticeable, effects are LQ, and that's pretty much it...