Voldemort

not to sure about this one, but here it is anywayzz,

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3167/voldy.png

The focal point is quite unnoticable for my liking. The c4d at the right takes my focus off the focus, and its quite small lol. But i like the text.

Not bad overall, goob job :D

i like the concept, but i dont like the render or the blue dot in his hand, i understand what the blue dot is suppose to be, but i just dont care for it to much. Good effects on the c4ds. I will have to disagree with Xeno, i do not like the text. Try to blend it alittle better, and place it in a more suitable location. Also turn the text back to normal, i dont like the whole sideways thing. Good depth

soft brush is too bright, text is distracting, and that C4D on my right is a bit oversharpened and takes away theh attention from the focal point.

also noticed some white edges around the fingers, and the canvas size is relatively small.