halo again

my vision of Halo. c@c plzz.

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9313/haloagain2.png

this is pretty neat man, i like it a lot, but= there is a lot of unused space, which is not always a bad thing, but i feel like you could use alittle more of it. I wish the render was alittle bigger, i understand the concept you were going for, but i still wish it was slightly larger. The lighting source is also not my favorite, it looks to much like a brush, try lowering its opacity a bit.

You missing some text here, but be careful were you place it; i feel like it could make or break the sig.

Overall you got some cool effects going on man, and i really love the colors. keep it up

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