evangelion

I decided to try and jump in with some text. I tried to keep it simple as possible and moving the letters abit closer to each other.

http://i37.tinypic.com/35kkfg0.jpg

Tell me what you think.

very messy

yea there isnt any flow or depth. try blurring and lay off the sharpen tool

To hectic, to many different colors. The render isnt blended well into the tag, try taking a 100 px soft brush eraser and click around the edges.

There would be depth if you put a light blur on the bg, i also dont see a REAL lighting source, thats an easy fix though.

Text is nice!

Thanks for the feedback guys. I will remake the sig and see if I can make the corrections that was pointed out so stay tuned in.

Ok I remade it less hectic and with more depth with a lighting source.

V1
http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/1640/evanv1.jpg

V2
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/5714/evanv2.jpg

Please list the Pros and Cons specifically so I can capitalize on what I'm doing right and wrong. I want to improve and hopefully do amazing tags like you guys are doing.

both are waayyy better in my opinion. way to take criticism!!

Geez now that I compare the old one to the new one I have no idea what I was thinking submitting that.

haha, its ok man, the most impressive thing is that you improved the piece so much off of like 5 comments lol

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Originally Posted by Kritez

haha, its ok man, the most impressive thing is that you improved the piece so much off of like 5 comments lol

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haha thanks. I dislike failed tags so I HAD to remake it and capitalize on what pointers you guys gave me. I actually learned a little bit more on how to blend better and add better depth.

More feedback would be appreciated guys. :]