Xelo Abstract

my first LP here. what y'all think?

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/1...loabstract.png

Hmm, First off I cant read the text what so ever. Try and make the text visable or just delete it. Also, I do not really like the contrast from light to dark. I think you should of just done a neutral lighting. The effects look really good though. Overall its a pretty nice artwork.

i agree with fur a bit, the text is 1- not very visible, and 2- it takes away from the effectiveness of the piece.

i personally LOVE the effects and color = great job, but i would definitely change/get rid of the font.

Great job man!