New vertical

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/831/vertikal4.jpg

Just had a surge of creativity and made this one after i had posted the one up there :P

http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/8569/vertikal5.jpg

1. nice effects, there is no text though, work on that. also, there are a few c4ds that seem out of place (top left), erase them or lower there opacity.

2. WOW, amazing effects, lighting... everything. it looks great. BUT, that text... has got to go. for one, its in the way of your lighting source. two, its a bad font. To fix this, choose a nicer, better quality font, and place it lower on the piece, once your done that play with its opacity and such.

overall great work man, keep them coming

First one is hot man, I would just blend the lower half in a little more.

Second one is nice also. I say it needs a little more blending and also the text is bad. I would pick a color that matches the overall color schem, and make it alittle smaller. Also I would make the light source a little smaller its too strong and to big.

Tried to do some improvements but im rly crap at text :(

http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/831/vertikal4.jpg

http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/8569/vertikal5.jpg

dont like the text again... lol

the placement of the text in the first is nice, just need better execution

1. Love the effect on the hand look hot.