New one

lol here's a new one :
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/8...tle45375d1.png

nice effects, great colors, good smugging. WAY to much negative space. fill that with something, it looks unfinished.

Try adding something in in the black space and nice lighting.

ok thx I'll try to do something

wow man that's awsum,
text springs out to much, but the font is good. when filling the neg space be sure it adds to the flow, cause that could be better imo. nice work mate!