Halo

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v2, eh not a big fan, very dull and the balance between the left and right side are way off. Not your best work

I love making halo signatures for some reason, so I've seen a pretty good number off halo signatures.
I'd say that your signature appears to be incomplete or unfinished.It looks as though you didn't really give this signature much of a effort.Sorry if I'm harsh, but that's my opinion.

I've seen that halo stock, and i was curious to know if you tried to render it or something?

Thanks

B/W is much better... sry to disagree fur.

things to work on=
-lighting source looks alitte forced/unrealistic. work with the burn/dodge tools.
-effects are minimal, i dont see much going on other than some smugging and lighting. add some c4ds/brushes/clip masks/filters
-there is no text, i would suggest adding something light

good work