Buisness Cards

false info btw
http://i37.tinypic.com/9rt9fo.png

Far far far too busy. You don't need the Dean Designs border thing on there and you don't need to put "Name: Dean Shorter" or "Location:..." etc, people are smart enough to realise that if there's a name there, it's probably your name, and if there's an web address there, it's probably your website. And just an observation, I dunno whether you wanted your logo to look like 2 penises kissing but it kind of does.

Good effort, but as said, it's got way too much going on if ya ask me. Keep it as simple as possible when it comes to cards. Assuming the bottom one is the back of the card, all you need is your name, phone number, email and your website. You don't need things such as "Name" either. People will read Dean Shorter and know right away that is your name.

ok thanks

Yeah I would agree and also, your logo needs work, good try though

I have some comments for you shorter so sit tight! :)

ok :D and thanks iScribble my first:D