Kira

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11-16-2009, 12:58 AM
Kipi

Kira

Omg

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/2621/v1kira.png

CnC?
11-16-2009, 08:33 AM
Fur

I like it, but the lighting is off. Part of his face is dark where the lighitng is coming from, while the other part is light and had no lighting. Only other thing is the left side is a little empty, I would just add something in there. Very nice work keep it up.
11-16-2009, 01:20 PM
-MM.Kritez

nice smudging, and effects.

things to work on=
-the glow in his hand looks on top of his hand, not in it= try erasing the glow on his fingers and leaving the rest normal
-the colors of the smudging and effects are very nice, but they dont blend well with the BG = it looks more on top of the BG than a part of it.
- lots of neg space = decrease the size
-add text

overall great job! its very nice
11-16-2009, 01:28 PM
Dom

Wow, I love your style. You have to make a tutorial! I love the depth and effects around your focal but I agree with Fur that the left side is a tag empty. I wouldn't add anything though, it could kill the flow. I love the colours too. Keep up the good work! :)
11-16-2009, 06:23 PM
fearlessfein

Love the effects .
11-17-2009, 12:04 PM
Kipi

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fur

I like it, but the lighting is off. Part of his face is dark where the lighitng is coming from, while the other part is light and had no lighting. Only other thing is the left side is a little empty, I would just add something in there. Very nice work keep it up.

I didn't notice that, ya are right, I forget lil' details sometimes. ._. I was planning on adding something to the left, but I figured it would break the flow like Dom said.

Quote:

nice smudging, and effects.

things to work on=
-the glow in his hand looks on top of his hand, not in it= try erasing the glow on his fingers and leaving the rest normal
-the colors of the smudging and effects are very nice, but they dont blend well with the BG = it looks more on top of the BG than a part of it.
- lots of neg space = decrease the size
-add text

overall great job! its very nice

Ty, the glow on his hand was a bit rushed(it was 2 am when i was making the sig X_x) I would add text but I dun have any good fonts that flow well with the piece. :[

Quote:

Wow, I love your style. You have to make a tutorial! I love the depth and effects around your focal but I agree with Fur that the left side is a tag empty. I wouldn't add anything though, it could kill the flow. I love the colours too. Keep up the good work!

Tehee, thank you. ^^ I would make a tut but i'm far too lazy sometimes, yep yep.