We Know Your Out There

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Very nice work Shorter. but the castle looks a little too small for being so close to the angle. Need to work on the proportions a little. Also the giant black cloud in the right hand side need to change that it doesnt fit in. Plus I would pretty much delete the text, I dont like text in LPs that much. Very nice work though

The different objects have been pasted onto it nicely, and the overall feel is good, but the clouds are rather ugly. There are large black patches in the middle and judging by the lighting, shouldn't be there.

The random blurring on the grass and path doesn't really fit and it's YOU'RE not YOUR. I like the picture though, it's interesting. Garamond is a good choice of typeface for this as well as it fits the theme you've chosen (especially if you read up about the font itself) but you need to watch the kerning on some of the letters.

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Originally Posted by Eleventee

The random blurring on the grass and path doesn't really fit and it's YOU'RE not YOUR.

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That was going to my two comments ;)