Another Spiderman

I did this while at college so I was a bit stretched for time but what are you're comments?

http://i45.tinypic.com/oggftt.png

Hmm the colors dont match it all that well, also it needs to have alight source I would make it come from the bottom, also you need to put some blending in the sig it will help the render look like it fits in.

+ C4d render effect will add to attractive ness

overcontrasted imo too red in my taste. looks unfinish u cud add more fx, add LS and a cool photofilter.

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Originally Posted by NoFeaR

overcontrasted imo too red in my taste. looks unfinish u cud add more fx, add LS and a cool photofilter.

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what is LS and FX plz tell me a little?

couple things to work on=
-the colors dont match up in all places (especially with the text), that purple throws the color scheme off. try adding a photofilter ajust layer.
-the render has a clear lighting source coming from spidermans left(the sigs right). you need to show that light source and great a location in which the lighting is coming from.
-the render isnt blended as well as it could be, to simply blend it try erasing around the outside of it lightly with a 100 px brush.
-add more effects, its boring right now, all you have is smudging. get some c4ds and brushes and try working with some clipping masks.

overall the smudging is pretty nice, keep working man

Thanks for the tips :)