Ok I took some of your tips into consideration and here is V2. I think it is much improved :) If I sat up all night and read tutorials I'm sure I could do better lol
http://i46.tinypic.com/x55uv6.png
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Ok I took some of your tips into consideration and here is V2. I think it is much improved :) If I sat up all night and read tutorials I'm sure I could do better lol
http://i46.tinypic.com/x55uv6.png
hmm seems better than the previous one.
but the sudden change from red to black makes it less mixed up. Use a C4d effect sharpen it and put it in the front.
keep posting!