Intimidate

Sorry but I'm not really creative when it comes to naming my signatures lol.I would appreciate it if you honestly told me your thoughts on this one.

http://i579.photobucket.com/albums/s...sofwarcopy.png

There's no flow, n' it looks pretty low quality.The C4D's look like they were just added randomly, ya picked a good render though

Left side effects look really good. Everything there is good, actually.

Right side is a bit messy. Maybe it can be fixed by going through it with liquify and adding then some more c4ds to create order and flow.

Depth is almost perfect IMO.

Thank you very much!
Hopefully i can fix the faults in my next try :)

the render effects that are coming on the face are not necessary,there is a mess over the sig text,if the light coms from the back window then it will look good. it seems there is some openeing near the roof i-e source of light!!!!!!
well good work.

http://i49.tinypic.com/2rgj38h.jpg