Cop!

Herer is my work

http://i45.tinypic.com/zyj2wy.jpg

Learn how to blend your renders or stocks. From what I've seen from your work, you seem to rush and just slap things together. The left side of it looks way out of place. You have mostly reds going on in this, and some odd brown to the left that just doesn't fit at all. Keep your text as simple as you can, and use basic fonts until you gain more experience.

well thanks for the comment :(