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still gotta work on ma text >_< haha
Still the text mate. Take a look at this http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showthread.php?t=45209
well tbh, not only the text. your focal doesn't blend at all. i can see you have tried to blend your focal, but you did a poor job. look at the top and the bottom. i would erase a bit of his "feet", that makes him sink into the bg, and get rid off the light yellow stripe at the top.
btw: funny render!
look at some tuts on blending and text
http://1lasthope.wordpress.com/resources/
excellent text tut by 1lasthope
well it is a way off putting text, but imo most of these texts are just slapped on top of the sigs and distract way to much from the focal. i like a text more blended in or a bit more into the bg, so that it adds to the whole. and if a text doesn't seem to fit in, just leave it out!!
i STRONGLY recommend you look at some tuts.
atleast give me sum feedback and i do look at tuts lol...
everything that's been posted in here is stuff that i would have already mentioned.
ok then lol