:Dhttp://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2...22rdsketch.jpg
Its massive :o
Effects over the face don't really go and the scribbly black lines at the top of her chest don't look good. Your main image needs to stand out a bit more
i am sorry, but this is not good. i don't want to be rude, but you can't just put some brushes on a picture and call it a day. please follow some tutorials.