http://i625.photobucket.com/albums/t...myeddiesig.png
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The effects are good, especially the yellow back glow at the head. However, the fire at the gun barrel looks obviously fake and the top half of the tag is way warmer than the bottom.
Text is a bit off putting. Maybe go for something a bit more simple.
The flash and sparks from the gun is good, but the black behind the flash can be removed by setting the layer to a "screen" style mode.
I also think that white smudge could be reduced in Opacity or set to soft light to show a bit of the background.
ok thanks ill try to fix that stuff up now
ok well here is 2 v2's with the flame etc i didnt take all of ur tips as to me it didnt look as good haha :p well here they r
http://i625.photobucket.com/albums/t...armyguysig.png
http://i625.photobucket.com/albums/t...myguysigv2.png
here lol just minor changes
To be honest, I still prefer version 1. Liking the C4D around the gun, but as already stated, the effects coming from the gun hole look too fake, and it looks bad. Bit too bright, maybe turn down the opacity or do a black-white gradient map, set it to soft-light, lower the opacity and erase all the too dark areas. Hope to see a version 3. Keep it up! :)
oh ok ill hopefully have a v3 up in a day or 2 :D
flow is crazy, the render is poorly blended, and the text is distracting.
hope i can get sum more feedback for when i wake up in the morning :D
bump :/
