Halo 3 Sig

I'm trying something new, let me know what you think and what i can work on, thanks

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/1480/halo3copy.jpg

I like it. :D
I'd blur the shoulder to the right of the tag a little more into the background and then sharpen the rest of the upper half of the render, so that draws the eye more so to the render. And I think the text would look better if it were a bit closer together, but I like the simple fonts used. The yellow in the text and light source switch the colors up just enough to make it less monotone, and it looks good. :D
And I may be getting a bit nitpicky, but I think the lightsource would look better not so far off into the corner. ^_^
Overall, I think you did a good job.

text is too noticible, the light source is strong, and the blending isn't very good.

depth could be improved as well.