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Hi, i'm just new here and also a photoshop beginner.
This is my latest one after i followed some tuts here =3
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/754...sbadkopie1.jpg
Dunno what to think of it, thats why i posted it here.
I need some comments, tell me what to do more or what not do :)

this is pretty good for a beginner.
however the text needs to be closer to the focal (render)
and the right side could be darkened a bit

seems really boring to me..
potential is there tho