life turned upside down

so i had to make a typography for school. its not due till next tuesday so im tryin to re work it a lil bit.. it needs somethin extra...
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/7043/lifeturned.jpg

mm goatee. I like. but here's a few ideas that might help it.

The words Upside down maybe flip them upside down. literally. You have a lot of room to do word play and you arent fully using it.

Maybe switching fonts a bit could help too, but they still work not to bad rigth now.

I think it'd rly help you if you reworked the color scheme, turning your life upside down is a big thing, its in your face you can't dodge the changes. Make it look that way.
Also maybe add a background unless you want your prof to see the text and ONLY the text. But maybe a texture would make ti look cool?

the squares through me a bit. Nothing about the words is square like. even the alignment is off and diagonal. so i'd maybe drop those, but i do like how you turned it to the side, emphasizes the TURNING well.

Overall GJ man. maybe a few changes though.

Hows the art school going? Btw i talked to fire, his gfx company closed but he's about to get his degree form the gfx school in london.

i like the concept, although the piece didn't really go well with it. as papa said, if your life is turned upside down, it would be much more drastic than what you have made this piece.... also i wanted to say... your newest tag, i like it, ive used the render before but i liked what you did with it as well. but as for your life upside down piece, its good overall, could just use a few tweaks here and there.

yeah i was thinking flip the word down but never thought of flipping upside, and i did add a texture but it got kinda.. standard of text and texture i donno thanks for the help guys ill re work it a lil bit

schools goin good papa :] next week is finals

also, i just thought of this, but maybe if you just flip the words "upside down" upside down, it might be cool, idk for sure how it'd turn out, and yes i understand that it would then logically read my life down upside, but it may look cool and people would get the concept. either way, good luck with it. :)