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I think it's a bit too bright. The C4D'S in the background aren't really adding anything to the tag either, just taking up space. Try and create some flow with them! :) The border is horrible, the colour just looks sicky and I would suggest (after changing colours of the background) sticking to a black border. Good positioning of render though and a nice attempt. Just keep reading those tutorials! :)
well thanks for the comment. i added the c4ds to get a sparkling bright bg effect. thanks for advice nice one :)
The clipping mask is nice, the color is a bit too bright, and the text is really hard to read.
