my ecstasy.

newest piece. c&c always appreciated.

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/9972/soberxtc.jpg

I like the idea, nice job on the text, however the bg could use some building up and also the models' right arm could be blended a bit more, otherwise well done mate:)

cool effects and i agree about the bg and text. On the text, maybe leave the left side as is and put the right side a little behind her breast so the whole thing surrounds her..jus a thought.

That bg needs something more to boost the flow to me. good job overall:)

i actually build that bg from scratch and was experimenting with it for a while but too much going in the bg would lose the focus of the text idea i had in mind. this was something new i'm trying out. mostly i was trying to give it a hypnotized/ecstasy feel. thanks for the c&c anyways.

wow bro. i really like your work. BIG FAN!

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Originally Posted by prj.sober

i actually build that bg from scratch and was experimenting with it for a while but too much going in the bg would lose the focus of the text idea i had in mind. this was something new i'm trying out. mostly i was trying to give it a hypnotized/ecstasy feel. thanks for the c&c anyways.

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Understood. I wasn't thinking about effects so much as maybe the tones to help boost the text overall. I love what u did with it and was thinking of how to bring it out just a bit more....a nice curve layer on it perhaps?

anyway, great job on it:D

i love the txt, truly do, fits well with the theme, but u didnt spend enough time on anything else, keep workin on it :)