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I think you should change the text
Other than that looks Good =D
pretty cool. yeah, maybe u can play that text into the flow. some bits that are sharp look like they should be blurred and visaversa...hurts the depth to me
you have some parts that are overshapened and some parts that are overblurred,
add some more to help with depth. lighting is alittle strong, but correctly placed... kinda