Karas

http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/4375/karas.png

CnC, please?

red color bad for this..on his face

too much glow in my opinion hard to see the full focal

You have some cool effects there.
But it's hard to figure out what the render is.
I don't really know where I am looking at :p
And maybe try to put some text in it?
KIU